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Dear Highcommand,

Im not sure if I obeyed all the rules of

Haiku, but how are these ?

CMBO player

sending me turns in haste

the burning tank

the whole forum

Jason_C writing long technical grog porn

comparing data

Come over with me

and together let's play

poor old penger

Hehe ...

Please write more !

[ August 27, 2002, 12:42 PM: Message edited by: Scheer ]

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Originally posted by Scheer:

Dear Highcommand,

Im not sure if I obeyed all the rules of

Haiku, but how is this one ?

CMBO player

sending me turns in haste

the burning tank

the whole forum

Jason_C writing long technical grog porn

comparing data

Please write more !

Edited cuz I'm stupid.

[ August 27, 2002, 12:49 PM: Message edited by: GWDWD ]

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Haiku, Japanese verse form, notable for its compression and suggestiveness. It consists of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables.

5-7-5 people. Please play by the rules.

This is not strictly true.

days begin to chill

night of the refresh monkeys

cool totally sweet

edited to say the above is my CMBB haiku, not CMBO, and to request a new CMBB feature, that being, after losing, if you write a gnarly enough haiku, you get a draw or minor victory.

[ August 28, 2002, 03:03 AM: Message edited by: 86smopuim ]

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How happy the birds

Busy feasting on corpses

Littering the earth

Yes, I know it's macabre, but you should see the battlefield for Head for the Hills after Bertram and I finished mauling each other.

The guns are now still

And birdsong is heard once more

Earth still screams in pain

Regards,

John Kettler

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