Pzman Posted June 9, 2001 Share Posted June 9, 2001 The Scenario zone page has been updated! Our team has 8 people. For a list of names check out our web page. Only 5 are listed at this time. [below from June 9th] I am the webmaster of this new team. Now its going to be like most other scenario teams we will test and release them. Also well will take requests. The page it self is at The Scenario Zone [ 06-10-2001: Message edited by: Panzerman ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michael Dorosh Posted June 9, 2001 Share Posted June 9, 2001 <BLOCKQUOTE>quote:</font><HR> Just to let you know most of the scenario (sic) will not be historical. But as time gose (sic) by I hope that we can do more. Now the frist (sic) secnario (sic) I am working on is called "Juno Bridge". It is a simi-historical (sic) scenario about British airborn (sic) companys (sic) trying to hold onto a bridge south of Juno beach. The Forces are of cores (sic) in Germanys (sic)favore (sic)as the Brits are just Airborn (sic)units and there (sic) suppys (sic) are short. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Will you also be hiring a proofreader, then? [ 06-09-2001: Message edited by: Michael Dorosh ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pzman Posted June 9, 2001 Author Share Posted June 9, 2001 <BLOCKQUOTE>quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Michael Dorosh: Will you also be hiring a proofreader, then? [ 06-09-2001: Message edited by: Michael Dorosh ]<HR></BLOCKQUOTE> HAHA... give me a break. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pzman Posted June 9, 2001 Author Share Posted June 9, 2001 Ok page spelling has been fixed so you little perfectionists can feel better. Also I still need 1 more people so send me a line. [ 06-09-2001: Message edited by: Panzerman ] [ 06-10-2001: Message edited by: Panzerman ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pzman Posted June 9, 2001 Author Share Posted June 9, 2001 The page as a small update about the scenario "Juno beach wich we are working on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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SuperTed Posted June 10, 2001 Share Posted June 10, 2001 Stop bumping! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michael Dorosh Posted June 10, 2001 Share Posted June 10, 2001 My apologies if English is your second language; the site is laid out nicely with good graphics, but you really need to get someone to edit you. Books do sell by their covers, and unfortunately, the first thing they see is your spelling. Half the errors I pointed out have been left unchanged and the new parts of your page have many more. I am not trying to publicly embarrss you, but I suspect many will pass on your site based solely on the unprofessional presentation. That would be a shame. Since I am one of the "little perfectionists" feel free to email me at madorosh@home.com and I would be delighted to spell check and grammar check for you. I would also be interested in writing scenario briefings. If you need bonafides, I have a degree in Communications and am a published author. It's up to you; I offer these criticisms as a courtesy. Many won't bother - and will simply pass you by. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pzman Posted June 10, 2001 Author Share Posted June 10, 2001 Ill do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pzman Posted June 10, 2001 Author Share Posted June 10, 2001 All postions are full and we are well on the way to haveing our Frist Scenario ready. Thanks to all who volunteered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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