Ozzieboy Posted August 28, 2002 Share Posted August 28, 2002 Some really good Combaiku here...this has always been my favourite thread. Wife sheds many tears No husband in bed tonight CM has arrived Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thin Red Line Posted August 28, 2002 Share Posted August 28, 2002 About CMBB : From the woods they rise (In my CDV version) Waffengrenadiere 9th Panzer right hand Roars raising dust of the steppe Left aisle rolls Viking [ August 28, 2002, 05:08 AM: Message edited by: Thin Red Line ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barrold Posted August 28, 2002 Share Posted August 28, 2002 Anticipation Sunshine drive to Chicago Rune's house sneak peak wow Graphics Doo-dads Armor Covered arc machineguns rule Dead men in the field Molotov Cocktail Tossed in the Stalingrad breeze Burns the tank very well 88 remains hid Assault guns rumble in fog Reach out and touch one BDH edited because I missed a syllable [ August 28, 2002, 11:20 AM: Message edited by: barrold713 ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barticus Posted August 28, 2002 Share Posted August 28, 2002 Silent gun awaits Enemy armour attacks Smoke will stain the sky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hakko Ichiu Posted August 28, 2002 Share Posted August 28, 2002 Originally posted by Andreas: Flowerlike blossom my KV shines red tonight 88 struck hardSomeone needs to go on a date, me thinks. Of course sometimes an 88 is just an 88. Here's one that won't be in CMBB: Dog sniffs autumn breeze. Thunder rumbles along the trail. Bright flower blossoms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leeo Posted August 28, 2002 Share Posted August 28, 2002 hands shaking like leaves fingers send rounds into dark perhaps just a bear? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barrold Posted August 28, 2002 Share Posted August 28, 2002 Deathclock ticks seconds Reload quick thunder on way Target is unclear Straightlined infantry Waves as if by the ocean My forces too thin Preset barrage rains Steel dragonflies and hail whiz Next will come the tanks Factories are huge Thick walls defended to death Windows allow breeze Demo out in days Nature will not be seen much Computer screen glows BDH [ August 28, 2002, 01:38 PM: Message edited by: barrold713 ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakthrough Posted August 29, 2002 Share Posted August 29, 2002 In honor of the impending release of CMBB, here is yet another lost item from the Noodniki Tank Works archives. Its title is 'Lenins Legacies Lament'. Here goes... "Here I sitzky, broken hearted... Bought a T-26 Vickers knock-off, and cant get it started...." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
86smopuim Posted August 29, 2002 Share Posted August 29, 2002 Dog sniffs autumn breeze. Thunder rumbles along the trail. Bright flower blossoms. Nice work. You win by combaiku. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Kettler Posted August 29, 2002 Share Posted August 29, 2002 Minedogs are not in Yet the steppe is richly strewn Burning tanks everywhere In his boots feet stay But his body is no more Katyusha hit Doors slamming in the sky Foretell the coming shells Earth will soon explode Regards, John Kettler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thin Red Line Posted August 29, 2002 Share Posted August 29, 2002 Originally posted by John Kettler: In his boots feet stay But his body is no more Katyusha hit John, you're a true poet . . To my brave 33k In the night glows red Gentle light of my modem Downloading demo [ August 29, 2002, 05:08 AM: Message edited by: Thin Red Line ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Kettler Posted August 29, 2002 Share Posted August 29, 2002 Thin Red Line, Thanks! Sadly, that one's based on reality, specifically a dig of German trenches on the Vistula line. In the shattered remains of the German entrenchments were some poor Landser's boots--his skeletal feet still in them. About as evocative as it gets (saw the pictures). The article was in either MILITARY ILLUSTRATED or AFTER THE BATTLE. Swirling fight in orchards Death tolls in ringing armor Prokhorovka clash With lethal tongues of flame And pistol port for entry Dies the Ferdinand Regards, John Kettler [ August 29, 2002, 05:59 AM: Message edited by: John Kettler ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Kettler Posted August 30, 2002 Share Posted August 30, 2002 Over open sights Katyusha shrieks her rage Panzers die or flee The steppe in flame erupts Mine blast rips both wheels and tracks How hungry the guns! The orders are clear No stopping for comrades hit Friends die in burnt grass No gun from Stalin Cartridges, a handful Death at Vyazma Regards, John Kettler [ August 30, 2002, 04:09 AM: Message edited by: John Kettler ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMplayer Posted August 30, 2002 Share Posted August 30, 2002 Awaiting demo: black coffee, pizza, naked, frizzy hair, wrist pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Kettler Posted August 31, 2002 Share Posted August 31, 2002 SU-85s Lying in ambush in wheat Soon dead Panther tanks! Driven from their bunkers Stalwart defenders eat grass Surprise for Germans Dora births a monster Piercing all it strikes Severnaya dies Regards, John Kettler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurtz Posted August 31, 2002 Share Posted August 31, 2002 I think I'll recycle this Combaiku, I've got a feeling it'll be a appropriate description of tomorrow's events. Gamers ecstatic Webserver exhausted Demo released Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[Wiking] Posted August 31, 2002 Share Posted August 31, 2002 Howz about a CM Rap thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epée Posted August 31, 2002 Share Posted August 31, 2002 Midnight movements press refresh, refresh, refresh concrete jungle chimp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fieldmarshall Posted August 31, 2002 Share Posted August 31, 2002 Scheer: Get a girlfriend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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