Bud Backer Posted April 12, 2020 Author Share Posted April 12, 2020 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Sgt.Squarehead Posted April 13, 2020 Share Posted April 13, 2020 Cliffhanger! 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Canadian Cat Posted April 13, 2020 Share Posted April 13, 2020 On 4/12/2020 at 7:10 AM, Bud Backer said: That's it for me then. My avatar does not make it. A fitting end to a trouncing by @Bud Backer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bud Backer Posted April 14, 2020 Author Share Posted April 14, 2020 11 hours ago, Sgt.Squarehead said: Cliffhanger! Just a small cliff... more like a curb, than a cliff! 9 hours ago, IanL said: That's it for me then. My avatar does not make it. A fitting end to a trouncing by @Bud Backer Yes, and you were a good sport to play on despite being down to a handful of men! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Heinrich505 Posted April 14, 2020 Share Posted April 14, 2020 Arrgghhh...the last gasp before....???? Before What? What else could happen? Shrapnel from the ammo cookoff nails our last two survivors? Very cool story, Bud. Loving it! Heinrich505 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bud Backer Posted April 15, 2020 Author Share Posted April 15, 2020 9 hours ago, Heinrich505 said: Arrgghhh...the last gasp before....???? Before What? What else could happen? Shrapnel from the ammo cookoff nails our last two survivors? Very cool story, Bud. Loving it! Heinrich505 The last gasp before... A Minion invasion! Run! 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Bud Backer Posted April 15, 2020 Author Share Posted April 15, 2020 And then... there is the after-End end... 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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danfrodo Posted April 15, 2020 Share Posted April 15, 2020 Dang, that is one epic whuppin'! Thanks for all the work you put into entertaining all of us. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freyberg Posted April 15, 2020 Share Posted April 15, 2020 That was great! And it looks marvelous - thanks 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aragorn2002 Posted April 15, 2020 Share Posted April 15, 2020 Indeed. Great read and very entertaining. Thank you for all your work, Bud! 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lethaface Posted April 15, 2020 Share Posted April 15, 2020 Nice finale! Literally fighting till the last men standing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bud Backer Posted April 15, 2020 Author Share Posted April 15, 2020 9 hours ago, danfrodo said: Dang, that is one epic whuppin'! Thanks for all the work you put into entertaining all of us. It was brutal. A lot harder than I expected. But then @IanLis good at what he does. 9 hours ago, Freyberg said: That was great! And it looks marvelous - thanks Thank you, and thank you for the comments along the way. Nice to get some reactions and feedback. 5 hours ago, Aragorn2002 said: Indeed. Great read and very entertaining. Thank you for all your work, Bud! You’re welcome. Glad you enjoyed it. 3 hours ago, Lethaface said: Nice finale! Literally fighting till the last men standing! Yes, that was unexpected. I thought he had more infantry in the village. One minute we were fighting hard and then suddenly, you could hear the birds singing in the silence. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bud Backer Posted April 15, 2020 Author Share Posted April 15, 2020 (edited) So for those of you that read this I wanted to ask, how was the narrow perspective (one squad, very few big picture overviews)? Was it all confusing? Did the confusion seem right, given the story, or was it just annoying? Did the map with locations and page numbers on page 2 help? How did you like the style - few text balloons and no onomatopoeia (“Boom, Bang, Pow”) and the comic had a lot more text in straightforward paragraphs, compared to my other comics. How about the picture-in-picture panels? I wanted them to let me show a large shot, but also to be able to add additional shots that show more information and cover the main image where there is irrelevant info. At some point I have to do what I think is best from a creator’s standpoint, but I am always interested in hearing constructive feedback, whether about what I asked above or anything else. Edited April 15, 2020 by Bud Backer 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MOS:96B2P Posted April 15, 2020 Share Posted April 15, 2020 1 hour ago, Bud Backer said: Did the map with locations and page numbers on page 2 help? Yes. Very much. 1 hour ago, Bud Backer said: How did you like the style - few text balloons and no onomatopoeia (“Boom, Bang, Pow”) and the comic had a lot more text in straightforward paragraphs, compared to my other comics. Both ways work but I like this way better. It seems more of a military fight than a fight between Batman and some rival. 1 hour ago, Bud Backer said: How about the picture-in-picture panels? I wanted them to let me show a large shot, but also to be able to add additional shots that show more information and cover the main image where there is irrelevant info. IMO this along with the map on page #2 is very useful. Good job. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bud Backer Posted April 15, 2020 Author Share Posted April 15, 2020 (edited) @MOS:96B2P Awesome, thank you for taking the time to write answers to my questions, really appreciated. I will know better if others add their own thoughts but it’s my impression that the map on page 2 made things not end up confusing. Edited April 15, 2020 by Bud Backer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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